Critics

She put on his shoes.
Walked around, but left confused.
No fault was found
To explain each choice he choosed.

But her feet, much tougher
Could not detect
The pebbles which provoked
The actions he may soon regret.

Two faults were found
Leaving nothing constructive left.

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